[求助]]帮忙修改一下这篇东西

When I am down and, oh my soul, so weary;

Mwh gou ninz roengz seiz,ou aen sim gou,unq eh lai.

　　When troubles come and my heart burdened be;

Mwh gou miz nanh daeuj gyawj gou,aen sim gou naek gwd naek.

　　Then, I am still and wait here in the silence,

Nyaenx ne,gou lij youq neij yaepyaep daengj mwngz,

　　Until you come and sit awhile with me.

daengj daengz mwngz daeuj nem gou naengh mbat ndeu.

　　You raise me up, so I can stand on mountains;

miz mwngz nyoengxhwnj , gou cix benz ndaej hwnj dingjbya ndwn sangsang.

　　You raise me up, to walk on stormy seas;

Miz mwngz nyoengxhwnj ,gyanghaij fwn naek rumz siq(haenq) gou cix gamj byaij bae coh.

　　I am strong, when I am on your shoulders;

Gou goj maenhak dangqmaz,vih'aen mwngz dawz genmbaq hawj gou douh.

　　You raise me up… To more than I can be.

Miz mwngz nyoengxhwnj ,gou  daengxndang  miz rengz hawj gou gag cix mbouj gamj saenq.

　　You raise me up… To more than I can be.

Mwh gou doek,o hoenz gou,naiq baenz neix;
  

Mwh gou gwd,gou miz aen hoenz ou swg ndeu,daengz ngoenzneix de cix naiq baenzneix.  

Mwh aenrwix ma caw gou na baenz neix;
  

mwh gij yakrwix guh hawj naj gou geq baenz neix,

Gou cix caj youq gix baenz caemrwd,
  

gou goj rouz youq gizneix caemrwdrwd.

Daengz mwngz ma naengh riengz gou caemh ndeu.

Daengj(deq) mwngz daeuj nem gou naengh guhdoih.

Mwngz gingz gou hwnj,nyinxcix gou hwnjsoengz youq gwnz bya ndaej;
  

Mwngz gingz gou hwnj daeuj,ndigah gou cix ndwn soengz youq dingjbya baihgwnz.

Mwngz gingz gou hwnj,hawj gou byaij youq gwnz haij miz fwn ndaej;
  

Mwngz gingz gou hwnj daeuj,hawj gou din caij byongjraemx gyanghaij fwn doek dwk.

Gou baenz maj bae,mwh gou youq gwnz mbaq mwngz;
  

Gou mbwkmaj bonghbongh(bwnhbwnh),mwh gou youq gwnz mbaq mwngz duenh neix .

Mwngz gingz gou hwnj.... Sang gvaq gou guh ndaej.

Mwngz gingz gou hwnj sang sang....sang daengz gou gag yeux mbouj daengz.
  

　　You raise me up… To more than I can be.

呵呵 笑死我，你那翻译是哪跟哪呀？看来要打击你一下了，根本就是在死搬硬套，牛头不对马嘴！

人家说“你鼓舞了我”，你却说是“你把我举起来了”，人家说“躺下“，你却是“掉下，落下”。